tbh I think it's too summarized.

We need some clear titles from the perspective of someone who doesn't know what open source is. Take some simple example, like cooking receipts (the difference between a backed cake you buy and having the receipt), at least something very simple to understand at the beginning of the page.

• What is open source ?
• Why does it matter ?
• What are the benefits for the users / the association / the company
• Comparison between traditional model and the open source model

Can you move the current content to a new node and restore the original revision? Give allan access to edit the new node then.

Restored original page contents as first step.