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  • Page 1: The left box grey was darker in the older version - the lighter grey makes orange text blocks "AXIOM Beta" much harder to read.
  • Page 1: The left box used had the word "Product Brochure" in a slightly larger font giving it headline weight, now in the latest version all the text is the same size.
  • Page 1: its great that all chapters are now clickable
  • Page 4: The term "4K" resolution and Super 35 diameter might not be common for industrial/scientific target audiences so I would suggest we write "ams Sensors Belgium CMV12000: 4K resolution (4096 x 3072 Pixels), Super 35mm (APS-C) diameter, " instead - I made the changes here: https://www.apertus.org/axiom-beta-tech-specs
  • Page 6: I would crop the content of the photo of the Beta on the left side and shift the photo content further to the left
sebastian created this task.Jun 14 2018, 10:26 AM
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RexOr added a comment.Jun 14 2018, 10:09 PM
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RexOr added a comment.EditedJun 15 2018, 12:50 AM

Page 1 - Fixed
Page 1 - Fixed.
Page 4 - Fixed.
Page 6 - Too much effort to do this (Although what you described was what I did on the previous version) / New image in pipeline.

... and other general improvements.

New link - https://cloud.gerade.org/index.php/s/fdyrnFHxLnnXG52

sebastian added a comment.Jun 15 2018, 9:27 AM

Well done!

I replaced the PDF on the server inplace.

We can take a new photograph for page 6 on Monday together if you did not capture one by then already.

sebastian closed this task as Resolved.Jun 19 2018, 11:07 AM